After a long time of break here we are back to find another big challenge, yes is ... work in our writting (yeap) thats what we do, thats who we are (jk), but this time my teacher for a long time and a good friend told me, this is a serious group so in fact I'll be more serious then I used to be, is these related to our theme for today?. It is, because we can find the best and the worst on everything, like in everyday life, our past, our present or maybe some people can do it in their future, but in this time we going to talk about cellphones!!!! (aplausse).
Yes cellphones, now days (always getting smaller), that little device is not more a machine that help us to communicate with others, now we can make reservations for airplanes, or restaurants, even we can do our laundry, but that ting never ever is gonna replace the toilet paper.
Before, the cellphone used to be like a big brick that you can use it for construction , it was black, big, and the screen it was just out of color. Now is smaller, diferent colors and the screen is so detailed that u can take pics of 5.6 mp, to good for a talking device. And is here when I begin with my own comparation about the best and the worst for cellphones (look is just my oppinion for serious oppinions go to mechanic popular or somewhere else, not here in a ESL-Writing class)
Cellphones: The Best The Worst
Size Now can fit in your pocket; Sometimes you can lost it
Color Now days is different nice colors; Who likes Fluorescent Green Budda
Service You can make calls wherever you are; Your boss can call you while you
are in a vacations on the middle of the desert
Reability You can save more information like your info from your contacts; It doesn't work if the only
contact that you have is your voice mail (please add me)
Well still a lot but for now is enough so if you have trouble wit your cellphone maybe is time to change it for another one more new or maybe is time to change the company service or if you don't want that save your quarters.
Nice - Let's work on breaking up the sentences and using spellcheck -- that's my opppppinion.
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