The food is the principal livehood.
All living need food to live.
The plants take their food from the ground.
Food came in different zise, presentation and,flavors.
In the Art. on the cooking, we have, for example: colombia, chinese, mexican, italian food, and others.
The food would have a good presentation to get the people attention and finally eat it.
The fruit give a good presentation in the Art.on the cooking.
CONCLUSION: All the food is good but( made it with love is better).
Good job adding more periods on all of the above. It is easier to read. You somehow changed your tone, though; you took out some of your fun comments, which wasn't necessary. You also don't need to put the word "conclusion" at the conclusion.
ReplyDeleteYour next challenge is to search for a "middle ground" - where you use shorter sentences AND include your personality. You have a lot to say, so working with the STYLE will be difficult but interesting.