Thursday, April 15, 2010

Writing everyday life: Food

Yes food the prohibit passion for those who are on a diet, well they doesn't know what are they losing, foods came in different ways and sizes, food is some of the good things on life.
I like spicy food, but mostly I eat everything except some really worst looking foods and mole verde, but other then that I enjoy food, and am happy cause I guess to the end of the quarter we gonna have a party at the class and we have to bring some food and I know is gonna be a lot and good food so please if you cooking something and you have an extra save it for me I'll eat it!!!!.

1 comment:

  1. Great ideas; same issue with run-on sentences (see my comment below.)
    grammar - make these changes -
    prohibited passion
    they don't
    what they are missing
    foods come in different styles and sizes
    food is one of the good things
    bad-looking (not worst)
    at the end of the quarter
    if you cook something

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